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Friday, January 27, 2012

Written In Stone - Chapter Four




This chapter was full of red ink to start with, most of the ink due to silly mistakes overlooked in my panic to get things going. I was getting frustrated at the legnth of time it was taking to move to the next chapter each time. On this work I sent and resent four times before the editor was REASONABLY satisfied, but even then, she wasn't entirely pleased by my not getting a particular scene quite as she wanted it. In the end she left me to clear things up but I know when we finish the edit and go for the polish, she will dab this one with a big brush. See what you think about the scene where Anthony rescues Barbara's lover from drowning. It's very short but took forever to get finished where it is. It's not just a question of showing action or description, it's getting that invisible thing called atmosphere and feeling through to you, the reader. Let me know if it worked. Its still not quite right. Notice all the (he)'s during the rescue.

CHAPTER FOUR

A mass of screeching seagulls circled, swooped, and dived around the Enchantele as she entered the outer harbor at Villefranche-Sur-Mer draw. Her nets were n up on either side and hung from the side booms. A pile of orange buoys attached to the net line lay behind the hatch cover at the stern of the boat. As she made her way around departing vessels, she left a thin trail of diesel smoke hanging in the air and seagulls bobbing up and down on her white effervescent wake.
        Several fishing smacks painted in faded colors lay at anchor in the outer harbor or tied up to the quayside wall, rising and falling on the swell. The quay ran for a hundred yards until it joined with a steep bank of grass running alongside the coastal road.  Across the road, scarlet geraniums overflowed from flower boxes beneath the upstairs windows of a row of houses bathed in bright sunlight.   
       Anthony stood in the bow, his bare feet feeling the heat from the wooden deck. His weather beaten face belied his age as did his calloused hands. A few years at sea had transformed him from a youth to a muscular seaman. His hair was thick and black, comprising of a mass of ringlets cut just below the top of his ears and across the nape of his neck. Hidden beneath were several small scars. Shielding his eyes from the glaring noon sun, he looked across the bay at the Golden Daffodil, an eighty foot white luxury yacht moored alongside several other smaller cruisers some two hundred yards away. On the foredeck, under an awning, he could just make out Mrs. Fitzgerald lying on a lounger.
        The Golden Daffodil lay berthed in the quieter waters of Villefranche-Sur-Mer away from the public eye. Barbara Fitzgerald, a tall, slender and attractive American in her fifties was a woman with influential friends in politics and the art world. She was a careful woman who shunned the press. Across the bay and beyond Mount Albon lay Nice, a short six kilometer drive to all the expensive shops, boutiques and restaurants she loved. 
        Barbara met Anthony through Baris, one of the stewards from the Golden Daffodil. Anthony worked in a local bar after leaving his last ship when Baris, a regular, struck up a conversation with him and they became friends.
       Baris worked most of his life at sea. Greek police on Crete had slaughtered his family of migrant workers during the 70’s. The two men hit it off and it wasn’t long before Anthony gathered a lot of information about Barbara Fitzgerald and her collection of priceless paintings. 
       He made sure his new friend was aware he was looking for another berth and when a crew member left the Golden Daffodil, Baris told his captain about Anthony. Barbara attended the interview without getting involved as the captain went through Anthony’s seamen’s log. A nod from her at the end of the interview and he was signed on to the crew.
       For Anthony it was the first time he’d been so close to real money and he began to hope his dream to acquire a small fortune might become reality. He needed money in order to keep a pledge made to the memory of his dead mother.
       Barbara Fitzgerald spent June and July at Villefranche every year, hosting parties or flying off to see friends in other parts of Europe. Anthony made a point of remembering her likes and dislikes. He learned to make her favorite cocktail, Tequila Sunrise, the way she liked it and kept her stateroom in the shade to keep the sun from damaging paintings. The curtains were drawn and opened throughout the day according to the position of the sun. He was careful to be courteous and called her ma’am with a slight incline of the head. In front of guests she was Mrs. Fitzgerald. He needed her trust to achieve his goal.

That opportunity presented itself at an evening birthday party for Barbara. The yacht was filled with influential art dealers and artists. Baris, always on the lookout to make money, pointed out one particular dealer to Anthony as a possible contact, should he come into any kind of questionable art or jewelry to be sold. Another guest, a Greek by the name of Ioannis Koskotas, spent most of the evening at Barabar’s side. At one point he moved away from her, holding  a kerchief to his mouth as though he was about to be ill, and staggered out onto the foredeck.
Anthony was returning from the bar with their drinks when he saw Barbara join Ioannis, who was leaning over the rail being sick. She grabbed at the Greek’s jacket as he slipped further over. At the same moment, the yacht crested a large wave. Ioannis swayed and lost his balance. He made a grab for the rail but missed. In a split second, despite Barbara’s frantic effort to hold on to him, he plunged over the side into the boiling black water. Light streaming from portholes illuminated the Greek’s head and arms amongst the white wave tops as he broke the surface before disappearing back into the darkness.
Barbara screamed and turned, panic stricken. She clutched at Anthony’s arm. “Please do something,” she pleaded. “Oh, my God, help him!” Sinking to her knees, she gripped the rail and screamed out to Ioannis.
Anthony dropped the tray. The glasses shattered at his feet. He ripped his jacket off, climbed over the rail, and jumped into the water. His lungs burnt. He surfaced, gulped more air and dived under again.
            A strong current pushed him toward the yacht. He kicked against the yacht’s hull. A flailing arm struck him across the back. He twisted in the swirling water and grabbed it.                                                 He wrapped an arm around the Greek’s neck. A few seconds later his hand closed over the companionway.
            A steward and some guests pulled Anthony and Ioannis from the water, coughing and choking. Ioannis couldn’t walk. Two men carried him up to the deck.
Sobbing, Barbara followed Ioannis down to the staterooms below. As she disappeared she called, “thank you.”
Anthony sat for a moment on the bottom step, gasping for air and coughing. Salt water stung the back of his throat. He reached for the rope rail and hauled himself upright. Leaning on one of the stewards, and shaking, he managed to stagger back to the deck. He paused by the rail to catch his breath. Guests gathered around him, all congratulating him. Some were applauding. Baris wrapped a blanket around his shoulders. He patted Anthony on the back.
“Well done my friend.” 
“Here, young man, you’ve earned this and another for good measure.” A guest offered a glass of brandy and shook his hand. Anthony gulped the brandy in one mouthful, and then coughed as the alcohol warmed his throat and stomach.
Feigning embarrassment, Anthony excused himself amid all the celebrations and made his way to the stateroom stairs. Water dripped from his clothes and his soft deck sandals squelched as he walked. Several guests followed him, patting him across the shoulders while Baris helped him down the stairs.
The following morning Barbara thanked him again and asked him to drive her to Nice on a shopping trip.



Parking in the city center, Barbara asked Anthony to stay with the Bentley. With nothing better to do, he settled down to read a newspaper. From time to time he glanced out of the window at young women strolling by, remembering the last time he shared a bed with Adrienne.
     Full of life, Adrienne was a free spirited girl who loved to dance and party, and compared to most prostitutes in Marseille, her beauty set her apart. They met every now and again, whenever Anthony got back to port. It wasn’t just sex. He wanted female company; someone to dance and laugh with. He missed her. Two hundred kilometers away from Nice might just as well have been a million.
     After sitting for two hours, he decided to stretch his legs. His white shirt and trousers were damp against the leather upholstery. He stepped out of the Bentley and stood under a nearby eucalyptus tree, enjoying a cool breeze that played over his back and through his hair. 
     A short while later he heard Barbara calling him from across the road. Her bright yellow dress, contrasting sharply with a candy striped canopy behind her, billowed about her legs. A row of shopping bags leaned against each other and a small box sat next to them on the sidewalk beside her. She dabbed her face with a tissue and then gave him a quick little wave as he crossed the road. He picked up the shopping and accompanied her back to the Bentley.
     “Thank you, Anthony,” she said.
     He flashed a smile. “Pleasure, ma’am.”         
     On reaching the Bentley, he opened the trunk and lined the shopping up across the floor. Barbara climbed in to the rear seat.
     As they drove home Barbara said, “Anthony, I’m in town next weekend. I have several errands to run. I hope you’ll be available.”
     Nodding, he said, “Of course, ma’am.”
     That trip started badly. Barbara’s hair stylist was off sick and for over two hours Anthony sat at the back of the salon reading magazines while Barbara fussed at the stand-in stylist. Nothing seemed good enough. She adjusted the ties on the bib around her neck, complaining they were too tight and she brushed the girl aside when she tried to help.
     “Are you sure you know what you’re doing,” she said, irritably. “I can’t wait for Denise to return. She knows just how I like things. You young girls have no idea about personal service.”
     The worst moment came when the girl rinsed her hair.
     “Stop, you’re burning my scalp! What do you think you’re doing? How dare you treat me like this,” she shouted. She pushed the rinse tube out of the girl’s hands and glared at her. “I’m going to complain about this and if you think you’re getting a gratuity you can think again.”
     Later she made the girl go hunt for more sugar. Her coffee needed sweetening. Anthony felt sorry for the girl and grinned broadly whenever she looked his way. She smiled back but as he opened the door for Barbara he noticed the girl walking quickly to the restrooms with a hand over her mouth.
     The bad day continued at the Rolls Royce dealer’s service department. The Bentley was due for a service and Barbara found her business manager had not booked it in. Anthony listened as she insisted the garage made a mistake and should take the limousine in for a service.
       “This is ridiculous!” she shouted, banging a fist on the counter. “My Bentley has been serviced here for the last ten years. The standards of customer care here are falling. Now, find me a slot today. I’ll leave the Bentley outside.”
       When they refused, Barbara asked to see the manager.
       Anthony sat on a nearby couch, hoping the manager might deal with the problem before Barbara’s mood set in for the day.
       “I’m sorry, Mrs. Fitzgerald,” he said, “but we are fully booked for today.”
       He asked her to book the Bentley in for the following week. 
       “If I ran my business like you I’d have nothing done. Attention to detail, careful planning and looking after clients are the corner stones of any successful business. Yours is going downhill,” she snapped.
        Furious, she left the limousine parked at the rear of the dealership and stormed off to the stores.
       One or two errands turned into more than a dozen. Barbara flitted from one store to another and by the time she finished, Anthony was laden with bags and sweating. Back at the Bentley, he swung the bags into the trunk, lining them up neatly as before. He closed the trunk and stood for as moment with both hands on the lid.  Sighing under his breath, he closed his eyes. When he opened them he caught Barbara’s eye.
       Barbara’s stern expression turned briefly into a knowing smile. She touched his arm then said, “I guess today hasn’t gone to well for both of us. I’ve got such a lot on my mind. I may have to fly to a meeting in Athens tomorrow.”
       Anthony looked away at a gleaming Rolls Royce standing nearby, then back again, a fixed polite expression on his face.
       She breathed deeply. “Let’s have lunch. That’s the least I can do.”
       “Oh, no that’s alright, Mrs. Fitzgerald.”
       Barbara shook her head. “I appreciate your help, Anthony. Why don’t you drive us to the Negresco Hotel on the Promenade des Anglais?”
       Ten minutes later they walked into the Negresco restaurant and a waiter showed them to a window seat overlooking the promenade.
       Traffic glided along the road in a procession of gleaming limousines and sports cars mixed here and there with noisy scooters. Little pockets of pedestrians walked leisurely along the promenade, some with cardigans draped around their shoulders, the arms knotted around their necks. Others dressed in shorts and T shirts walking a poodle or shiatsu on a long colorful leash. Behind all the activity the sea looked choppy, small green-gray waves cresting white. 
       “So tell me, Anthony, what was the first ship you signed on to?” Barbara peered over the top of her reading glasses, normally hanging from a gold chain about her neck. “Did you suffer with sea sickness?” She continued browsing through the menu.
       Anthony looked away from the scene outside and picked up the menu. “The Caledonian Princess,” he replied, “carrying containers of general cargo between Seattle and Tokyo.” He opened the menu and looked down the list of entrĂ©e’s, his right heel tapping the carpet.
       The conversation carried on through lunch with Barbara showing interest in where he traveled and the cargos’ he worked with. He recounted the worst storm he’d sailed through off Cape Horn in a refrigerated ship carrying mutton from New Zealand. Sea sickness claimed nearly half the crew. The most exciting trips, he enthused, were working on banana boats between South America and Liverpool. Bananas were loaded shortly after they were picked and in England before they turned yellow.
         “Are your parents still alive, Anthony?”
       Anthony’s eyes flickered. The question caught him off guard.  “No,” he replied, swallowing hard. His fingers played with his cup, turning it in the saucer.  “My father left my mother six months before I was born. She…. she died giving birth to me.”
       Barbara lowered her cup and leaned forward, gently placing a hand on his forearm. “I’m so sorry, Anthony.”
       “Well I didn’t know either of them so….” He sipped his coffee.
       “I don’t know what it feels like to have no parents but I have found out living on your own isn’t much fun either. I suppose the men you worked with were your family.”
       Anthony nodded.
       “I don’t miss Geoffrey,” she said, flatly.
       Anthony took his cue. “You were married a long time then, Mrs. Fitzgerald? Was he already in business when you met?”
       “Just about.” Barbara gazed out of the window. “It was tough at first but the hard work began to pay off. Mind you,” she said, removing the napkin from her lap, “I sometimes wondered if the long hours were worth it.”
       Anthony sat, silent. She paused, a faraway look in her eyes. She turned back to him, the hint of a smile on her lips that disappeared as fast as it formed. “There were a lot of bad moments when things didn’t go our way but we overcame them.” She sighed and folded the napkin into a square before putting it down. “There were quite a few good times too.” A warm smile returned, remaining long enough for Anthony to feel uncomfortable.
       He lowered his eyes and nodded. When he looked up he could see she wasn’t finished.
        Geoffrey was Anthony’s age when they’d met at some party, and shortly after got married. A whirlwind romance, she said. Geoffrey started a small freight business, financed with the aid of an inheritance.
        “The hotel chain came later. Geoffrey turned into a bit of a playboy.” The smile disappeared and the voice rose, each word edged with a little bitterness. She studied Anthony’s hair, and then looked into his eyes. “He was a real looker and you know what they say….money and men? Irresistible.” The head shook as though she were shaking bad memories loose. “Rather funny that, Geoffrey at fifty…. a playboy.”
       She shrugged.
       After his death she sold Geoffrey’s businesses off but kept the Trafalgar Art Trust they started together. It was all she wanted.
       A pause followed her recollection. She brushed a jacket sleeve with the back of her hand then picked up her purse.
       “Well, I suppose we’d better get back.”
       “Thank you for the lunch, Mrs. Fitzgerald.”
       Barbara clicked a finger at the waiter for the check. “That’s something else….” She sounded almost absentminded as she handed the waiter a credit card. After he left she leaned forward and said in a low voice, “You can call me Barbara when no-one’s around.”
       They drove back to the yacht in silence, Barbara sitting in the back seat. 
        From that moment on a respectful friendship developed and over the next few weeks Anthony became her favorite steward.



The Enchantele turned into her berth alongside the quay and bumped against the row of tires, her engine throbbing quietly. Anthony jumped onto the quay, balancing his rod in one hand and a small basket containing cod in the other, then made his way to the promenade. He turned onto the road leading to where the Golden Daffodil was docked
       Near the marina he stopped to look at a small but powerful fishing smack with a ‘For Sale’ sign stuck to the wheelhouse. It was all he’d ever wanted, a dream since his teen years. She was a sea going fishing smack with twin outboards and room for a good catch. Beads of sweat glistened on his broad forehead and trickled down the side of his nose. Flicking back strands of hair, he frowned. He pulled the end of his T shirt up and wiped the sweat from his eyes and face.
       A large Mercedes interrupted his thoughts as it roared past, kicking up gravel and a cloud of dust. In the second it took for the large car to pass, he caught a glimpse of the driver. It was the Greek who’d visited Barbara several times, including attending the cocktail party when he’d fallen overboard and ended up sharing breakfast with Barbara the next day. Anthony spat on the ground and shook a fist at the disappearing car. He ran forward through the cloud of dust, an arm across his face, and spotted Barbara waving to him from the deck of the ‘Golden Daffodil’.  He waved back and quickened his pace.
       When he reached the top of the companionway she was waiting for him. Dressed in a red sarong over a white bathing suit, she smiled broadly. Her deep red lips parted slightly revealing an even row of white teeth. Wearing a gold chain necklace and a pair of pendulum drop diamond earrings; she was Anthony’s idea of how a film star looked at the film festival in Cannes.  
       “How was the fishing?” Her hazel eyes settled on the basket and a broad smile spread across her face. “Excellent, what did you catch?”
       “Cod,” replied Anthony, stepping aboard.  He held up the basket.
       Barbara took the basket from him. “Thank you, Anthony. I’ll fix some salad to go with it.”
       A breeze coming off the water snapped one side of the awning in a staccato beat. 
       Barbara brushed a fly away from the table.  “We’ll eat out here.”
       Anthony went below to his cabin. Small but comfortable, it held little furniture save a cupboard, dresser, mirror, hand basin, and a walk in shower and toilet. Above his bed there was a wooden cross affixed to the wall and on top of the dresser there was a small black and white photo of his mother in a silver frame.
        Anthony tossed his fishing rod onto the bed and undressed. His tanned body showed scars from several fights over the years. Life at sea had kept him fit. He glanced at the photo of his mother. Barbara represented the life his mother never enjoyed. Not the money; but rather the freedom she never had.
       He showered and changed into jeans, a T shirt sporting the Greenpeace logo and a pair of open sandals.
       Barbara was laying the table when he returned to the foredeck. The late afternoon sun threw a soft pink haze across the deck and tinged her white trouser suit
       “Let me do that, Mrs. Fitz….Sorry, Barbara. I’ll fetch the salad.”
       Raising her eyebrows, Barbara pointed Anthony to a chair. “It may surprise you but sometimes I like doing things for myself.” Her chin jutted out slightly as she raised her head. She rolled her eyes in the direction of the galley and continued, “When Geoffrey was alive I couldn’t find time to do anything. Life was chaotic to say the least. Of course, that all stopped the day Geoffrey died. Nowadays I like to fuss around the kitchen when the chef is off duty.” As an afterthought she added.
       “Maybe if there were children …..” She sighed, finished laying the table, and left to fetch the salad.
       Anthony watched her disappear inside, a shock of red hair cascading over her shoulders and across the back of her suit.


Barbara’s red hair and good looks had always attracted admirers from an early age. Her parents, cattle ranchers from Texas, put her through college and on graduation, rewarded her with a trip to Europe. A friend in London invited her to share an apartment with her in Knightsbridge. Barbara loved the idea and moved in. Shortly after the move they attended a cocktail party where she met Geoffrey, introduced to her as a ‘man most likely to succeed’ by her friend. She thought him a handsome man with his shoulder length black hair. Just over six feet tall and muscular, his blue eyes sparkled within a tanned face painted with a permanent smile. By the end of the party they were inseparable and a short four month romantic affair ended in marriage. 
The early days of the business were full of stress.  It was a period of mental anguish and a nonexistent home life. They spent most of their time apart, snatching quick conversations on the phone or finding rare weekends when they could spend time together at their home in London
       Geoffrey attacked business problems with a zeal she admired. Tenacious, outspoken, and larger than life, he always wanted her opinion yet rarely agreed with her. As the business began to take off the financial issues began to recede.  Geoffrey showered her with gifts, the result of a guilty conscience he told her, for all the things she went without. On her birthday the first year after floating the business on the stock exchange, he bought her the Golden Daffodil. For the next three years they were the ‘must have’ couple society wanted at dinner parties and charity events.
       Then Geoffrey bought out a large chain of hotels. It didn’t take long for the rumors to start about his affairs. She wasn’t too surprised.
        Her love for him dissolved leaving a hollow marriage devoid of trust. Whilst she ignored his girlfriends he accepted the lover in her life. She learnt to be more assertive and organized her life with schedules that kept her busy most of the year. After his death she spent a comfortable life entertaining her friends and being more involved with her art foundation. 
       It came as a pleasant surprise to find Anthony was so like the young Geoffrey in more ways than just looks. He was a man with an even temperament, good manners, trustworthy and a hard worker. She liked him. 


The corner of a copy of the La Monde newspaper lying on the table fluttered in the breeze. Anthony picked it up and absently turned the pages with interest. He stopped when a picture caught his attention. His eyes narrowed. Greek billionaire Hrisacopolis was going to transport the Elgin marbles back to Athens on one of his luxury liners. As he read the article, Anthony’s breathing became shallow. He gripped the paper and by the time he’d read it through twice his heart was racing. Taking deep measured breathes he folded the paper carefully and placed it back on the table. He uncorked a bottle of wine, poured two glasses, and then stood looking out across the bay. Holding a glass with trembling fingers he gulped the wine.   
       Barbara appeared from the stateroom pushing a small serving trolley.   “Well now, that breeze is very welcome, don’t you think?” She brushed strands of hair from her eyes.
       Anthony nodded. The freshly baked cod made his mouth water.
       Placing the cod and salad on the table, Barbara served Anthony with some salad before helping herself from the bowl. Replacing the serving spoons, she sat down and looked across at Anthony. Resting her elbows on the table, she interlaced her fingers and twiddled her thumbs back and forth. She said, “Anthony….I need to speak to you about something important.”
       Without replying, Anthony continued removing bones from the cod with the fish knife and placed them, one at a time, onto a side plate. He paused, his knife mid air. His eyes focused on a bunch of jangling keys as Barbara removed them from her purse.
       “I will have to fly to Athens tomorrow.”
       Anthony continued to eat without saying a word.
       She placed the keys in front of him and picked up the glass of wine. “Have you heard of a man by the name of Hrisacopolis?”
       He appeared to think. “No….I don’t think I have.” he said.
       She tapped the table with her knife and pointed to the newspaper. “Well, you can read all about Hrisacopolis there. I’ve known him for a long time.”
       She needed to sort out problems at the Trafalgar Trust right away. There was an early morning flight and she wanted him to drive her to the airport.
       “I need someone to look after the yacht. The crew has gone on leave for a month as you know.”
       “I’ll be happy to look after the yacht, Barbara. I could get the limousine serviced too, if you wish?”
       Barbara smiled. “Good, and perhaps you would check the bilge pumps every….” She gave up competing against the roar of a passing helicopter, tapping her plate with a fork. She waited for the whine of the engine to fade before continuing. “Could you check the bilge pumps every now and again?  She placed her knife and fork on the side of the plate and reached into her purse. Taking a key from it, she attached it to the bunch of keys. “You’ll need the office key as well.”
       Anthony’s stomach knotted. The office contained several paintings. These included two Picasso’s and a Renoir.
       “Good, we’re all settled then.”

That night, Anthony sat on the end of his bed. He took an envelope from the bedside table and drew a faded letter from it. He’d read it many times. The feeling of loss was overwhelming, mixed with a sense of injustice. Anger turned to hatred. He replaced the letter and sat with both hands gripping his knees. “Damn you to hell, Hrisacopolis!” His hands balled into fists.


Thursday, January 19, 2012

WIS - CHAPTER THREE



In this chapter I had a lot of problems trying to hold the readers attention while introducing Enda to Jessica and showing their individual attitudes whilst giving each other information. In the first ten chapters there is a lot of political information to give the reader on a drip feed basis and I wrote first and then had to cut out about 50% of my enthusiastic writing because, as the editor said, "You are giving the reader a history lesson, just give a little and let them figure out the rest" (or go to the library). The other problem is that fiction is being woven into the facts and it takes a long time to get it right. These ten chapters took almost a year to write and the rest (34 chapters so far) were a breeze in roughly six months. I still have five chapters to go but I love writing the action, murder and mayhem.

Your thoughts and comments are really helpful and give a broad view across the reader spectrum as to how the story will be received. It also allows me to tweak here and there when something is not quite right. Thank you.

CHAPTER THREE

I knew there were liver and onions on the menu the moment we stepped from the elevator. The canteen was a pale yellow walled area in the basement, brightly lit by fluorescent tubes and filled with noisy chatter and smoke. It was the only place in the building where the smoking ban was ignored. Journalists sitting on yellow plastic chairs crowded around ring-stained table tops scattered with plates, mugs, notebooks and leather bound organizers. Cell phones rang periodically too, each with its own signature tune piercing through laughter and loud debate. I often wondered why we had a cubicle when most of the work was done over a cup of tea and curry.     
       A strong aroma indicated a fresh brew as Jessica and I joined a short queue for the coffee stand. Unfortunately we found ourselves standing behind O’Grady and one of the junior secretaries from the news room. She looked totally bored as the new manager engaged her in conversation. Seeing me she smiled.
       “Afternoon, Mr. Osin.”  She picked up her coffee and, after reaching for a napkin, made a hasty retreat.
       O’Grady turned and grinned. “Still with us then, Enda?” His cup clattered noisily into a saucer. “Well, I guess demotion has its compensation,” he said, grinning suggestively at Jessica.
       “Just get your coffee, Gilbert, and leave us in peace,” I replied.
       With a smirk, he poured coffee and moved off, one hand still holding up his trousers.
          Jessica sighed as she watched him walk away, a look of disapproval written over her face. 
       After grabbing the coffees I followed her to a corner table. It wasn’t a nice spot, what with dirty condensation streaks marking the wall nearby but then it was an empty table. The disapproving look returned as she stepped carefully over a piece of squashed tandoori chicken stuck to the scratched linoleum floor.
        I couldn’t help smiling. Old hacks were coming alive as she jostled around them in a pair of Prada stilettos. We headed for the table near an open window where fresh air squeezed in under escaping clouds of smoke. It was one of two windows that looked out from our basement ten feet below the street outside. Natural light was limited due to the brick retaining wall close by but at least there was fresh air.
       “What’s so amusing?” asked Jessica. She was balancing a coffee in one hand and some papers in the other.
       “Sorry,” I replied, “but you look so out of place in here.”
       The mauve cashmere suit stood out like a beacon amongst the drab array of dark jackets and gray trousers. Heads were turning as she walked past.
       “I go out to lunch most days.” She hesitated, then added, “Not to McDonald's either.”
       Max had lost no time in pointing out some of my eating habits.
        “I didn’t mean to offend,” I said.
       “No offence taken, Enda, but I do have to meet people in art galleries and auction houses such as Sotheby’s.”
       I couldn’t make up my mind if she was being sarcastic or serious. She brushed the seat with her papers before sitting. As she sat she crossed her legs, tugged at the hem of her skirt, and raised the cup of coffee to her lips in one smooth movement. Her high cheekbones and aquiline nose gave her a regal presence that could have graced any fashion catwalk. But it was the large almond shaped brown eyes that held my attention when she focused them on me.  
       Jessica looked over the rim of her cup and caught me staring at her. She sipped slowly, her eyes expressionless.
       I ran a finger over the scar running down my right cheek and looked away. The habit started at university when I tried to arrange dates. Several girls rejected me. I thought that was because of the scar.
       I got fed up being asked how I got the scar and lying about it. I still don’t like talking about it. Finally my aunt, who’d looked after me since the fire, persuaded me to go to a shrink. The shrink said I had to ‘find myself’ and ‘rise above the guilt.’ She made me feel more depressed after each session. In the end I gave up, lost myself in the Herald and rose five floors above the guilt to the newsroom.
       Jessica’s lips parted in a half smile but she said nothing. Raising the cup to her lips, she sipped.
       “So let’s talk about the Elgin marbles,” I said, trying to sound like a seasoned columnist.
       Jessica paused for a moment, and then asked slowly, “What do you want to know about them?” 
       She rested a hand on the table, a large red bead bracelet clacking on the surface. I hadn’t noticed until then how long and slender her fingers were.
       “Oh, just a brief outline on past and present. I know most of the history but I’m sure you’re better informed about past events than me,” I said, casually.
       Of course we both knew about the marbles but what I wanted to find out was what sort of researcher Jessica was. I didn’t want a history teacher. I wanted her opinions that might put a new slant on different aspects of the story and in particular the background to Hrisacopolis grand offer. Some sixth sense told me there was a story here but it wasn’t the one about the marbles.
       “I think you know more than you make out.” She laughed and looked out of the window. It was an infectious laugh that begged for company. We both laughed but I got the feeling her laugh was more governed by social expectations than spontaneous..
       Jessica knew her history but kept to an outline. The marbles had formed a frieze that lined the inner wall above the colonnades of the Parthenon in Athens. Centuries later it began a religious merry go round. She paused to sip some coffee, her fingers wrapped around the cup.
       “Hi Jessica, long time no see.” Jessica smiled and nodded at a woman colleague threading her way through the tables with a loaded tray. “You too, I’ll catch up with you later,” she replied, giving a little wave. Several heads turned our way as she spoke.
       Her voice intrigued me. It was soft yet husky, the kind you heard on those late night radio phone in shows that dealt with lovers’ relationships and musical requests. It attracted attention in a crowded room.
       I found myself looking at her lips as she formed each word. It was hard to concentrate on the commentary as the husky tones lulled me into a dreamlike state of mind. Of course I knew the history of the Elgin marbles and managed to jump back into reality now and again, nodding in all the right places.
       Of the original one hundred and fifteen Elgin marbles fifty-six were displayed in the British Museum, forming a two hundred and forty-seven foot display depicting an annual Panathenaic festival. Thomas Bruce, the seventh Earl of Elgin, Ambassador to Constantinople and the Ottoman Empire, rescued them, thinking the Turks would destroy them. He received a firman in 1799, a letter of instruction, from the Sublime Porte, ordering that the Athenian authorities could not stop his work. He was allowed to remove any pieces of stone with inscriptions or figures. This included two large statues from the Parthenon. According to the Greek writer Pausanias one depicted the birth of Athena from the head of Zeus and the other the struggle between Athena and Poseidon for the land called Attica.
        I smiled. Jessica Du Rosse was a lot more than a pretty face with a wealthy background.  She earned a degree in art from the Sorbonne and traveled all over the world, spending a lot of  time in London and Paris working for art galleries before combining her interests in photography and art. I took the trouble to quiz one of Jessica’s close colleagues before we met for coffee. She told me Jessica wanted out of the social merry-go-round and wanted something more challenging. That’s why she joined Hart Industries in New York. Two years later she came to London and headed up the arts department.
        “What about pictures?”
       “There are plenty in stock,” she answered.
        “I take it the stones are ours to keep…. Legally I mean? The Greeks have said in the past we stole them.”
       “Oh, they’re ours all right, according to the British Museum that is.” Her lips tightened in a wry grin.
       Our conversation was drowned out briefly by a shrill siren as police hurtled down the road outside. Being in the basement had its drawbacks. Sounds from the traffic just above our heads constantly competed with the general buzz in the cafeteria. Sirens always won, stopping all conversation. 
       Jessica’s research revealed that Elgin acquired the marbles as a private individual and eventually sold them to the trustees of the British Museum with parliament’s blessing. The letter of instruction, or Firman, was never seen by parliament. They had accepted a hand written copy and so the dispute began. 
       “I take it Max told you they’re being shipped back to Athens.”
       Jessica nodded and leaned forward, tapping the side of her small mug. She’d been holding the mug awkwardly in her left hand and it wasn’t until then that I realized there was a crack that would have touched her lips if she’d held it in her right hand.
        “This should never have happened.” She shook her head slowly. “No proper provenance means no legal ownership. Regardless of legalities over ownership they are going back where they belong anyway. The Greeks are going to rebuild the Parthenon.” Her eyes were on fire and her chest rose as she spoke. 
       It took several seconds for her remark to sink in and then I snorted. “What?”
       The idea bordered on the impossible and sounded like a bureaucratic fantasy. Every time politicians came up with some big scheme it nearly always ended as a giant cock-up. The Millennium Dome was a great example. That’s what happens when politicians meddle in the arts.
        “So who’s really squeezing the government?” she asked.
       My mug hung midair as I thought about that. “I’m not sure,” I answered, “but I wouldn’t mind betting Hrisacopolis is involved.”
       Hrisacopolis was a politically motivated animal. Without a doubt he had a few skeletons in his closet. Apart from him there were pressure groups who’d been lobbying for years. Most of them were based in Greece and the UK, and all of them had support from countries around the world. According to Max it looked as though the British museum trustees would agree to a compromise put forward by the Greek government that involved running a rotating exhibition of Greek art in the British Museum. The deal would also cover the cost of copying the marbles before the originals returned to Athens. The offer had been made in 2004 and like all dusty English institutions, the museum trustees dragged their feet from one month to the next.
       A breeze drifted in from the window, carrying the scent of Jessica’s Gardenia Chanel perfume. The back of my neck tingled and I took a deep breath. “Anyway, there’s a… um… there’s a-.” My mouth was dry and turning to rubber. I took a mouthful of coffee and felt my face flush. “This Sunday, there’s a meeting… about it. I…”
       Jessica turned and waved to her friend, and then turning back, said, “In Trafalgar Square. Yes, I’ll meet you there.” 
       Without another word, she rose and left me sitting there alone with her mug of coffee, hardly touched.  


Saturday, January 14, 2012

Chapter Two - Written In Stone







In the first chapter we are in the era of Nixon and the Vietnam war. It is also the era of unrest in Greece and on the tiny island of Cyprus. The terrorist group EOKA are all but finished on Cyprus after years of fighting the Turks for sovereignty. In Greece there would shortly be a military coup. On Cyprus there would be an invasion from Turkish troops who will commit terrible acts of revenge and split the island down the middle, a situation that exsists to this day. Cyprus is a member of the European Union but only controls half of the island although their laws should control all Cypriots. Turkey has over 50,000 troops who are technically trespassing. Turkey wants to become a member too but that is on condition that they clean up their human rights issues as well as many other issues, mainly concerning farming, banking and world trade - and clear troops from the island. The Turks won't budge and the situation has been in suspension for forty years. Recently it has come to light that the CIA have had a post on the northern half of the island dating back to the days of the cold war. They made an arrangement with the Turks that in return for the CIA prescence, the US would stop outside interference with the Turkish ambition to control the island. In the late 70's, the British were about to send a task force to the island to stop a Turkish invasion. A phone call was made to the British Foriegn Minister from Henry Kissinger who said - 'Stop acting like a boy scout and leave Cyprus alone.' This story was confirmed by a whitehouse diplomat visiting Turkey recently. Obviously, despite the will of the people on Cyprus who wish to have independence, it looks as though the situation will continue until the CIA leave. The EU is powerless.

The above is as factual as I can find out to date and I will update as and when I find out more.

Chapter Two we advance to 2006 and the real plot begins. Whenever needed I have used real facts and centered the fiction around them.

I visited Cyprus ten months before the Turks invaded and so I remember vividly what the northern side of the island looks like. It is possible to visit today but there is a curfu and the border closes at 6.00pm.



Unpolished

CHAPTER TWO

My blackberry rang as I drove around Parliament Square in pouring rain but I ignored it. If anyone wanted Enda Osin he wasn’t available until he’d drunk two cups of tea, especially at 6 am on a dark autumnal morning.
       Black clouds threatened a day of half dawn as my car joined a long queue of bright taillights choking up London’s city center. Feeling in need of company, I dialed for messages. Anything was better than studying the structural landscape or general hubbub around me. 
        The area was an architectural nightmare. Old and new buildings, some weathered and covered in grime, others covered in tinted glass, rose up to create a confused skyline of historic masonry and vacant office blocks. On a sunny day, shadows cast by the taller creations cast a mantle of darkness over all below, shrinking and growing but never disappearing. I loved the old and admired the new but couldn’t get used to this hotchpotch. That day they looked forlorn huddled in blocks sandwiched between hissing city streets. A sea of black umbrellas joggled for space as crowds hurried along the pavements and down dark passages between the buildings. Each was heading for a boring job in some big business or government office.
       There was only one message and that was from Max Edwards, my editor. I ended the call as soon as I heard his voice. I’d be meeting him soon enough. Up ahead, the lights changed green. I moved forward feeling a little depressed.
       Home for me was an office in Wapping, another developing area of east London and headquarters for the Hart newspaper group.  I was late for an appointment with Max and by the time I arrived at my space in the labyrinth of cubicles on the fifth floor there was a note on my desk ordering me upstairs. This meant leaving rows of metal desks sitting on linoleum tiles and rising up above the tenth floor to sink into Axminster carpets, soft leather furniture and breathe in the aroma of coffee. Of course there were a lot of business suits too. We didn’t see too many of them downstairs.
       There was another more subtle and invisible difference. Below the tenth everyone worked hard at finding the facts out on the street. Above, management worked hard at finding them in a bank account. That’s just the way it was.  Management’s top priorities were the big money advertisers and pandering to the political affiliations of the newspaper owner, Richard Hart.
        I was heading for Hart’s suite on the fiftieth floor, not that he was there. He was in Seattle for the World Media conference. That didn’t mean he wasn’t aware of what went on thousands of miles away. I was betting he’d had a call from D.C. or Whitehall. That’s why Max had summoned me. 
       I hadn’t been up to the fiftieth in a long time. The last visit was several years ago when I got an invite to a party for management. They always invited several minions from below the tenth who’d won an award or been recognized for a noteworthy story that made it around the world. It’s supposed to make one feel important: a team player and all that crap.
       I’d been on Canary Wharf when the IRA had blown a car bomb up outside a nearby hotel. I was the only journalist on the scene before the police arrived and cleared the area. It was a scoop.
       Max wasn’t going to pat me on the back this time. Instead he’d taken the unusual step of inviting me upstairs instead of issuing a summons to his own office. It was because he wanted to shout at me in private. This suggested I might be looking for another job by the time we were through.  
       I tossed my raincoat over the desk and ran my fingers through wet hair. Brushing some graying black hairs from my shoulder, I made for the elevator that pinged at me all day long. The damn thing was a few yards from my desk and irritated me intensely, especially at lunchtime.
       When the elevator arrived it was empty. I took a deep breath and stepped inside. The door closed, leaving me in silence.  Bad dreams and thoughts started rebounding off the walls of the metal box I had no escape from.
        I concentrated on the changing numbers above my head, willing the elevator to speed up. I tried thinking about the previous day’s column and all the names Max was bound to call me. After a minute I lost the fight as I always did in enclosed spaces. Loosening my tie, I leaned against the wall and closing my eyes, I heard mother and father shouting. Then the smell from thick acrid smoke engulfed me. I could almost taste it. Relief came with a slight bump, a loud ping accompanied by the hum of the doors sliding open. I stepped out onto the Axminster and sucked in a lungful of roasted coffee.
       An ex-fellow journalist, Gilbert O’Grady, stood to one side waiting to go down. He had a silly grin on his face. He’d been promoted a year earlier and obviously wasn’t used to management dress code yet. His creased trousers looked as though they’d been dropped concertina fashion on the floor and stepped into again the following morning.
       “Good morning to you, Enda.” His grin broadened.
       He passed me and stood in the elevator with one hand in a pocket hitching up his pants. His eyes never left me as a nicotine-stained finger stabbed at the button violently, as though hammering a nail into my coffin. I ignored him and straightened my tie. The man made me feel untidy.
       It took over a minute to walk to Hart’s office and by the time I got there I’d decided how to
annoy Ms Linguard. She was Hart’s first line of defense, a woman who I’d never seen eye to eye with since I greeted her as Ms Mudguard the first day we met. She never forgave me.
I just walked in and smiled nicely. In her mid-forties I guessed, tall with short blonde hair
and smartly dressed, Susan Linguard was busy sipping coffee. She sprang from the desk and stood between me and the inner sanctum.
      
 “Well, good morning, Ms Linguard. I believe the fuehrer is waiting for me in the bunker.”
      
 She didn’t return the smile. She turned her back on me and opened the door into Hart’s office.
       “Mr. Enda Osin, Max. Her nose rose an inch. “Can you please refrain from smoking in here? You know Mr. Hart doesn’t like it.”
       I didn’t wait for her to usher me in. “It’s alright Ms Linguard,” I said, making her jump as I brushed lightly passed her. “I’ll make sure he opens all the windows before I leave - okay?”
       She looked me up and down with tightly drawn lips and disappeared back behind the door without slamming it.
       I gave Max a limp seig heil salute. “Since when have you been on first name terms with Doris Day?”
       “None of your stupid humor, Enda.”  He paused and stubbed the cigarette out.  “I’ve been given hell over your column. Hart’s furious.”
       I expected he was referring to my column two days ago when I gave vent to a personal opinion and a little name calling. I regretted that and guessed I was goanna pay the price.
       “You mean I didn’t’ stick to writing the truth and nothing but the truth according to Hart?” I glared at him defiantly and stuck both hands deep inside my trouser pockets.
       Max was a little bald headed man in his late fifties. A pair of rimless glasses sat precariously on the end of his nose. He always dressed smartly in a casual way, wearing a suit only when necessary and never loosening his tie like many of his contemporaries. A large red nose and ruddy complexion gave one the impression that he drank but he was teetotal. Smart both physically and mentally, Max Hatton had wit but no charm.
       “Why can’t you remember there are times when your keep your damn mouth shut?” Scowling, he leaned forward across Hart’s antique rosewood desk, spreading both palms flat across its surface as if readying himself to pounce at me.
       He’d survived in the industry since starting an apprenticeship in the print shop and there wasn’t a lot anyone could tell him, especially the likes of me. He had the ear of anyone with influence within the news media and the City and especially politicians.
       He waved me to a chair.
        As I sat I crossed my legs and nonchalantly jiggled a scuffed Italian leather toe in the air. I told Max the article on the Amerigo scandal was one of my best stories in a long time. It was controversial, well informed and presented in the style our readers had come to expect.
       “Bollocks! His fist hit the desk hard, making me jump. You called the American President and the Prime Minister a deceptive double act. While one told congress what they wanted to hear about falling unemployment the other convinced parliament they were going to reap millions from the Amerigo project.” The cloud of blue smoke above his head thickened as he puffed on another cigarette.
       Max had taken a week’s vacation and while he was away I slammed the project without worrying about the editor’s red pen. His deputy, a long time buddy of mine with over thirty years on the Herald, loved the piece and left it uncut. Less than a year from retirement, neither Max nor Hart were going to fire him. I was a different matter.
       “The project was a disaster from the start,” I answered.
       Max reached for a copy of our newspaper from the desk, his angry blue eyes never leaving mine.
       Political advisors had warned their respective governments that the project was high risk. Now Amerigo had folded after taking a billion dollars from the government.
       “Where are the new C25 transporters? Nearly five thousand people staring at redun” ….
        Max held his hands up as I spoke. “You can’t resist going over the top can you?  Half the population calls our political leaders names but none of that goes into print, does it?”  Let the readers make up their own fucking minds what they think. You don’t tell them.” He picked the newspaper up, folded at the article, and waved it at me.
        “This paper supports the government.”
       “The owner supports the gov…”
       “Shut up! I haven’t finished.” Max took a deep breath and coughed before continuing.  “Hell, Enda, I don’t have to tell you the basics.”  There was a pregnant pause. I was about to speak when Max spoke again, this time in a low growl. “Hart got a call from the PM. He’s on the warpath.”
       “I-”
       “Shut it!” Max’s hand slapped the desk top with a loud thwack. “The Whitehouse were in secret negotiations with Boeing and a European consortium to take over Amerigo. Your financial forecasts have now stalled the talks. It’s about time you were slapped down to size!”
      
 His words stung. There wasn’t any point arguing with him. He was right. I’d let the pen flow, giving

vent to personal opinion.
      
With a worsening economic downturn on Wall Street, caused partly by financial bailouts for some members in the European Union and ten percent unemployment at home, President Walker was desperate for a miracle before midterm elections. He promised congress five thousand jobs if they voted in a billion dollars for Amerigo.  
       My sources in DC and Whitehall were whispering. The company didn’t have a chance, despite government orders for the new C25 aircraft. 
       I knew they didn’t.
        Auditors had been into Amerigo the previous year and come away shaking their heads. In Britain the Prime Minister told parliament that the joint trade agreement guaranteed two thousand jobs for assembly workers in the midlands and was worth twenty million pounds in the first two years. He didn’t say the new fabrication factories would cost taxpayers at least half that amount. I’d called the two leaders the best deceptive double act since Roosevelt and Churchill signed ‘Lend-Lease’.
       I sat there taking it all in, wanting to say a lot more, annoyed at Hart and the conservative’s he sucked up too.
       For a moment, we both stared at each other in silence, my eyes never leaving his. Then Max raised both hands and dropped the bombshell. Until I behaved myself, my column was suspended.
       “You can thank your lucky stars you still have a job, Enda.” He jerked forward, making me jump and slam my mouth shut. “I want you to know I spent over an hour on the phone with Hart telling him to keep you on.”
       I flinched then sank back into the chair.
       “He wanted you out right away.” Max waved a hand at the window indicating the way Hart wanted me to go.
       The door opened and Ms Linguard’s face appeared around it. “Max, Miss Du….”
       “Get out!” thundered Max.
       The door slammed. I felt a moment of satisfaction. Only a moment, mind. I was too busy grasping at straws.
       “Max, I’m sure I could sort things out with Hart.” I’ll apologize. Maybe I was a little over the top.”
       “No, absolutely not!”  Max jumped out of his chair. “You and Hart are like oil and water right now. You’ll stay out of his way. You’re being reassigned.”
       I gripped the edge of my chair. “What?”
       It’s a hell of a drop from columnist to correspondent. I felt sick and angry, very angry.  
       His words were hitting home and my face must have shown it.
       “If you feel that bad about it you can resign. I’m not fucking around. I had to crawl to Whitehall this morning.”
       “Sorry, Max, I didn’t know.”
       I was sorry for Max. He was stuck on the great divide, walking a tightrope between management and scribes, trying to keep everyone happy. I wasn’t sorry about the article though. A lot of honest workers were out of a job because of two politicians.
       Max shrugged, picked up a folder and tossed it at me.
       “What do you know about Hrisacopolis?”
       The name sounded familiar. I opened the folder and saw his face staring up at me. He was into shipping, oil tankers and cruise ships. But what got my attention were the rumors of political corruption. Word had it he was not averse to using a little muscle. He was a supporter of General Grivas and EOKA during the fifties, fighting for Greek sovereignty over Cyprus. There were a lot of Turkish Cypriots who died at his men’s hands.
       “A nasty piece of work worth billions,” I concluded.
       Max nodded. “He wants the chairmanship of a new means and ways committee.”
       I whistled. “I smell a story.”
       Max scowled. “You concentrate on the man’s philanthropic side. He’s offered to transport the Elgin Marbles on one of his ships from London to Athens.”
       I smiled and slowly shook my head. “That old chestnut.”
       The British Museum had refused to let the Greeks have the marbles back since the turn of the century. Things came to a head when Greece demanded the stones for an exhibition during the last Olympics. An argument ended in stalemate.
       Max updated me. The Prime Minister was negotiating with the Greek Cultural Minister for the marbles’ return. They were going home for good but at the moment there were no further details.
             He pointed a short stubby finger at me, his face set with that hard look that dared me to argue. Sometimes it was better to keep quiet especially when Max lowered his voice. “Here’s your chance to write something nice,” he emphasized the word nice’, letting it hang in the air, “about the Prime Minister. I want a four-part article covering the history of the marbles.”
       The series had to be a politically correct and authorized version of the Hrisacopolis family history and about the preparations to reinstate the marbles in Athens. The articles were going to run during the month lead-up to the voyage.
       Max rose to his feet and walked around the desk, indicating the meeting was over.  Patting my back, walking to the door, he said, “I don’t want any dirt dragged up or personal opinions, just a nice pullout article for our Sunday supplement. Got it?”
       “Yeah sure. Is that all?” I nearly choked. Sunday supplement.
       “I’ve also assigned you a photographer who’s a damn fine researcher as well. She specializes in art and antiquities and has already been briefed.”
       “She?”
       Things were looking black. First a Sunday supplement article and now this. What the hell did I want with a female chaperone?
       “Jessica Du Rosse - been working for us freelance for five years.”
       The name didn’t ring any bells with me.
       “She doesn’t live out of a suitcase or eat at McDonalds,” he added.
       I let the remark go. Resigned to my fate, I sighed and pulled myself out of the armchair. Max was tired and in a bad mood and I was past caring. I still had a job, albeit second best. With a bit of luck I’d get my column back provided I was a good boy for a while. I thought a diplomatic retreat would be in order and reached for the door.
       Max went back to thumbing through a sheaf of notes he was studying when I’d first walked in. Without looking up, he said, “Don’t let me down, Enda.”
       I opened the door, smiled nicely at Ms Linguard, and looked back at Max. “Don’t forget to open the windows.”
       He half smiled and waved me out. “Fuck off, Enda.”   
       Ms Linguard wasn’t impressed. Neither was the beautiful West Indian with her. Tall and slender with an hourglass figure, she was dressed in a dark mauve cashmere suit that looked as though it had just walked out of an expensive boutique in Paris. The faint hint of gardenias set my pulse racing.     
       Linguard bared her teeth. “Mr. Osin, this is-”
       “Miss du Rosse,” I interrupted.
       Jessica smiled and held out a hand. “Enda, nice to meet you. I’m looking forward to working with you.”
       We shook hands. “And I you,” I replied. “This is the first time I’m goanna share a byline with someone. I need to spell your name correctly, don’t I? I don’t want to get off on the wrong foot.” 
       I looked sideways and smiled. “Isn’t that right Ms Linguard?”
       Ms Linguard’s face froze and colored from pink to scarlet. I was beginning to feel a lot better.